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Score
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1
Does Not Meet
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2
Meets Below Target
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3
Meets Target
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4
Exceeds Target
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Focus
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- All my sentences tell about my topic and make sense.
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All my sentences tell about my topic and make sense.
I have an opening sentence.
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All my sentences tell about my topic and make sense.
I have an opening and a closing sentence.
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All my sentences tell about my topic and make sense.
I have an opening and a closing sentence.
My closing sentence retells the opening in a creative way.
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Support / Elaboration
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- All my sentences tell about my topic and make sense.
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I have at least 2 support sentences that tell about the prompt.
I have at least 2 details that tell about each of the support
ideas (may be a list).
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I have at least 2 support sentences that tell about the prompt.
I have at least 2 details that tell about each of the support
ideas with extensions.
I use a variety of sentence beginnings.
I tell reactions about how I feel
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I have at least 3 support sentences that tell about the prompt.
I have at least 2 details that tell about each of the support
ideas with extensions.
I use a variety of sentence beginnings.
I tell reactions about how I feel.
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Organization
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- All my sentences tell about my topic and make sense.
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I have a beginning, middle and end in order.
I use transition words.
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I have a beginning, middle and end in order.
I use transition words to connect ideas.
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I have a beginning, middle and end in order.
I use transition words to connect ideas.
I use a variety of sentences
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Conventions
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- My teacher and my classmates can not read and understand my
writing.
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My teacher and my classmates can read and understand my writing
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Score
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1
Does Not Meet
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2
Meets Below Target
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3
Meets Target
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4
Exceeds Target
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Focus
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- All my sentences tell about my topic and make sense.
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All my sentences tell about my topic and make sense.
I have an opening sentence.
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All my sentences tell about my topic and make sense.
I have an opening and a closing sentence.
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All my sentences tell about my topic and make sense.
I have an opening and a closing sentence.
My closing sentence retells the opening.
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Support / Elaboration
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- All my sentences tell about my topic and make sense.
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I have at least 2 support sentences that tell about the prompt.
I have at least 1 detail that tells about the support idea.
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I have at least 2 support sentences that tell about the prompt.
I have at least 2 details that tell about each of the support
ideas.
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I have at least 2 support sentences that tell about the prompt.
I have at least 2 details that tell about each of the support
ideas.
I tell reactions about how I feel.
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Organization
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- All my sentences tell about my topic and make sense.
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I have a beginning, middle and end in order.
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I have a beginning, middle and end in order.
I use a variety of sentence beginnings
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I have a beginning, middle and end in order.
I use a variety of sentence beginnings
I use transition words to connect ideas.
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Conventions
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- My teacher and my classmates can not read and understand my
writing.
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My teacher and my classmates can read and understand my writing
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Score
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1
Does Not Meet
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2
Meets Below Target
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3
Meets Target
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4
Exceeds Target
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Focus
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- Some of my sentences tell about my topic and make sense.
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All my sentences tell about my topic and make sense.
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All my sentences tell about my topic and make sense.
I have an opening sentence.
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All my sentences tell about my topic and make sense.
I have an opening and a closing sentence
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Support / Elaboration
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- All my sentences tell about my topic and make sense.
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I have at least 1 support sentences that tell about the prompt.
I have at least 1 detail that tells about the support idea.
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I have at least 2 support sentence that tells about the prompt.
I have at least 1 detail that tells about the support idea.
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I have at least 2 support sentences that tell about the prompt.
I have at least 2 details that tell about the support ideas.
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Organization
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- All my sentences tell about my topic and make sense.
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I have a beginning, middle or ending but not all three.
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I have a beginning, middle and end in order.
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- I have a beginning, middle and end in order.
- I use transition words.
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Conventions
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- My teacher and my parents can not read and understand my writing.
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My teacher and my parents can read and understand my writing
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Score
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1
Does Not Meet
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2
Meets Below Target
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3
Meets Target
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4
Exceeds Target
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Focus
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I write one sentence to tell about my picture or topic.
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I write 1-2 sentences about my picture or topic
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I write 2-3 sentences about my picture or topic.
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Support / Elaboration
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My words match my picture.
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My sentences have some interesting words that tell about the topic.
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My sentences have some interesting words that tell more about
the topic.
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Organization
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- I have words with my picture
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I write 1 sentence.
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- I write 2 or more sentences.
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Conventions
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- My teacher and my parents can not read and understand my writing.
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My teacher and my parents can read and understand my writing
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